tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8105847543127902266.post3514874745247969448..comments2012-05-09T11:18:03.646-05:00Comments on Kasey Mooney's EDM310 Class Blog: Blog Post #9Kasey Mooneyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01919290361190377800noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8105847543127902266.post-20343713137589034792012-04-07T16:35:01.879-05:002012-04-07T16:35:01.879-05:00Hey Kasey,
Your post is good, but there are parts ...Hey Kasey,<br />Your post is good, but there are parts that seem to be hard to understand. Look at this sentence: "After reading Mr. McClung's post, I feel more confident in just more so going with the flow, and if things do not go how I want, or intended it to go then it will be a lesson learned." This sentence is extremely hard to understand. Try separating the sentence into two or more sentences so your main ideas aren't misunderstood. <br /><br />Your links and your picture are working great!<br /><br />Stephen Akins<br /><br />Stephen AkinsStephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13013950577628601749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8105847543127902266.post-34692498110305142942012-04-04T21:31:53.832-05:002012-04-04T21:31:53.832-05:00Hey Kasey
My name is Sarah Webb. I am scared to s...Hey Kasey<br /><br />My name is Sarah Webb. I am scared to start teaching also. It is starting to seem like it is just down the road. I am not usually the one to criticize posts, but I think mine are very positive and will help you in the future. You tend to write in the wrong tense and do not make some words plural and they should be. The only other thing is I think you ahould have explained more about Mr. McClung's posts. I chose the same two you did and think you missed some very key points. Keep up the good work!Sarah Webbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05091124117019521033noreply@blogger.com